How to Write a Personal Essay for a Scholarship

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[enhance/expand the text with spicy wording - Craft vivid, immersive prose with detailed sensory descriptions, evoking emotional depth. Maintain a clear narrative flow while blending introspection and dialogue to explore complex concepts. Emphasize a reflective tone, leaving room for reader interpretation. Expand text in **, ignore content in [] - that's bg-info.), Background: I/Ashley got transformed into a girl back from a facility you went into after clicking a banner that is supposed to change your world, I had to take “transformation class”, I also met an old friend (a girl, now still too but visually enhanced), Now I got to meet my special someone, with whom I’ll experience new heights, a furry woman. Dont delete the plot happening, but rephrase, expand, add more details] The teacher instantly noticed that this could to something special: Oh so you met someone there I guess. She’s quite the character, don’t you agree? Well, what did you experience? With a puzzled faces they said: No, it wasnt actually us that experiecened something there but someone else in this class. We hoped that one would come on – herself – but it seems like she didn’t And now we are unsure how to continue on from here. The teacher: I see, that certainty sounds interesting. *Making progress is important. Bla bub add details on why*. So for that peason to enhance in her progress I’d like that one to come forth. Silence. I didn’t want to go there, nonono. And I mean it’s at possible they could mean someone else. Their eyes shifted towords me. God, no, please have mercy. The Teacher: Ashley! Would you please come step forward? I took my time, face pure red. I did wonder why these things do happen to me. Slowly moving forward I took seat on a chair she placed next to her. The Teacher: Now, would you be so kind to tell us what you Experienced. I shook my head In denial, not wanting to discuss about the things I experienced yesterday. The teacher went on: I see so you feel shy about talking about your experience. it's a total normal version but we can't keep you in a state of denial Can we. She took out that device that looked like some form of VR Goggle. The Teacher: Now I want you to place this on your head and focus on whatever you see in there Surprised I followed her instruction and placed it on my head. I have been greeted with a beautiful scenery of a landscape birds twitching, a waterfall, a white purple sky, All would seem with the purpose to calm me down. Words appeared accomplished by a voice: Breath in breathe out. Calm your mind. Listen to my voice. You begin to feel relaxed. No troubles, no worries. No harm can happen in here. This is your safe haven. When you are here you feel no guilt no shame nothing like that. Everything just feels natural. You can freely talk about the things that give you worries or that you otherwise would have feel second guesses to talk about. Yes breathe in breathe out. You also don't feel Uncomfortable answering Questions from your teachers. The scenery went on and the teacher asked me What I did experience yesterday. I began to explain how I met the furry at the modification shop. I gave a rough explanation on how she looks like. That have found its somewhat strange yet alluring. How I was asking some details about what she offers, her background stuff, while checking her out. Some classmates began to chear. Then I continued on the story, how I was tricked moving behind her desk. Up till the point where he brought me into the backroom, gave me an examination, Continuing on with details how she made me come. Twice. Something, -without that device I wouldn't have told in years I now told without any hesitation. Then the teacher asked and did everything happen afterwards for example when you went back home. I did nod. The encounter went through my mind the whole evening and night. Even when I went to bed. I did start masturbating thinking about it, Remembering what happened. I also thought what would have happened if she didn't say she's just doing girl on girl action. Had she really done that, I would have run out. But in my phantasy I imagined it happening, pushing me right over the edge.